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May 12, 2011
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Two, Six syllable Lines
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opinion speaks loudly
wisdom bites off its tongue
— brittle light, May 12, 2011
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Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Rough draft
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judyanne
15 years 1 month ago
lol
what do you want al?
blood everywhere clogging up all our keyboards?
seriously
a clever write
love judy
brittle light
15 years 1 month ago
hello Judy
thanks...minimalism, or more correctly, very short pieces can be fun...if they work as conceived
glad to see you back on campus
brittle light
15 years 1 month ago
only in demented cartoons..
only in demented cartoons...and in one of my nonsensical poems!
scribbler
15 years 1 month ago
Mnfe
Ori A it i onge fff. Translation: Sorry, I bit my tongue off lmao..........stan
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