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A Type of Poem of Self-Importance

I've noticed that there are quite a few
of these types of things....everywhere,
and from what I've seen, this much is true
they're not serious enough, that I should, care;

Of course, I'd never just, "up, and say"
that every day's a walk in the park,
but....assumptions, and expectations, on each day
can litterally turn a reality....."stark"!

A day in the life.....is exactly, "right"
not a millisecond past the day's end!
Try, as you will....as you use all your, "might"
one can't alter a long-standing "trend".

Hotter air, or a sizeable, "drama balloon"
may be the "jacket", that's hung on the "day",
but, "we" choose the words, and consider the "tune"
the whole world could care less, either way!

It's usually one's personal perception
that simply "blows".....clear, out of range,
familiar bridges, in, every direction....
...where self-importance, will surely, "derange"!

About This Poem

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

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M

magics02

14 years 3 months ago

Doc

I can feel this as you wrote it and would love to come back and visit it again with a clearer mind. Run through your spell check on it. There are a couple of places in that section. Hope all is well by you and hello to your Mom. Doc

Love Mona

CCfire

CCfire

14 years 3 months ago

Ellipses

I am not a huge fan of using so many ellipses in a poem, it detracts a little from the piece and with a rhyming piece it's much easier if it flows without those, I found some of it to be a little off in its meter but nothing a little editing and perhaps reading out loud can't fix :)