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May 01, 2025
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for the Unbroken
O Dionysus, breaker of chains,
I sing not for the meek, the tamed, the gelded—
But for the wolves who howl against the night,
Who tear the velvet lies from rotting thrones!
The poets now are eunuchs, lisping hymns
To hollow gods of equity and dust—
But we, the few, drink deep the blood-red wine,
And laugh as cowards beg for kinder chains!
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2 months 1 week ago
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Frederick Kesner
2 months 1 week ago
Perhaps this will be the post
Perhaps this will be the post…
Lavender
2 months 1 week ago
For The Unbroken
Hello, CB,
What a fantastic rallying call! Enjoyed this and its celebration of integrity and bravery.
Thank you!
L
Frederick Kesner
2 months 1 week ago
Many thanks Lavender. Your
Many thanks Lavender. Your kind words are much appreciated. Perhaps these are the only real weapons that we have at our disposal:)
Lavender
2 months 1 week ago
Very much...
agreed.
L