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Apr 28, 2023
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An uncanny calling
A cool uncanny calling
crucially crawling
into my ear .
Its valiant voice
of vigilance
vigorously
veering my
uneasy eyes
towards the
skittishly obscured
skies of what
lies beyond
the bend .
Where clarity’s
condescending
clutches never
dared to dwell
within the future’s
unforeseen
seams of
unfulfilled
dreams .
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Geezer
2 years 2 months ago
I am impressed...
with the alliteration, and the smoothness of the lines. This piece reeks of innermost thoughts and swirls with what if's. I like this a lot! ~ Geez.
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Edward nigma
2 years 2 months ago
Thank you geezer
I was inspired by the first 8 minutes of the animated short of Johnny Appleseed. Which gave me the idea of a voice veering you into venturing towards the unknown trails of the future .
https://youtu.be/kloQqdrnHkM
Lavender
2 years 2 months ago
An Uncanny Calling
Hello, Edward,
I enjoyed this! You've nicely captured the feeling in the video in your unique style.
Thank you!
L
Edward nigma
2 years 2 months ago
Thank you lavender
I’m sorry I haven’t been around lately because well I’m about to graduate high school and my head pain .
Lavender
2 years 2 months ago
Hello, there!
Congratulations on your graduation! Best regards!
Take good care,
L
Geezer
2 years 2 months ago
Congratulations!...
Glad to see you have accomplished that milestone. Sorry about the headaches, they are the worst! Hope you are better soon. ~ Geez.
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