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Hon
Hon
Dec 13, 2022 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)
This poem is part of the challenge:

December 2022 Random Challenge Under the Mistletoe

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Under the Mistletoe

I came to you
on Christmas day
to express my love for you
for the joy that you brought
into my life
filled with a sense of warmth
to see the radiant smile
on your face
with the question
that I popped to you
down on my knee
in asking you
to be my lovely wife
my heart was hoping
for the answer to "Yes"!
in witnessing our lips
pressed gently against
each other
in celebrating this special occasion
with a truly blessing gift
on a holiday season
that instilled a great memory
to be cherished forever

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Jackweb

Jackweb

2 years 6 months ago

The word is:

I came to you
on Christmas day
to express my love for you
for the joy that you ×(bring) (brought)✓
into my life

Very nice meditation words fancy arrangement.
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Triskelion

Triskelion

2 years 6 months ago

A little help?

..I don't see what the issue was with the word "bring". If you could explain it please.
Thanks

Thomas