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Jun 30, 2012
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UNDER NIGHT SHADOWS
UNDER NIGHT SHADOWS
Come with me
my Spirit
my Soul
under night shadows
hold me
bring me
to another dreaming
soothe me
with words of salvation
heal my body
if just a day
lull my fears to sleep
dance me away
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Geremia
13 years ago
Well said, Lonnie !
Well said, Lonnie !
Ian.T
13 years ago
Joe
I believe that if you ask it will be given, sometimes not in the way you want but mostly in the way you will Need, a piece that asks for Peace.
What can I say more other than well asked, Yours Ian.T
Geremia
13 years ago
Nothing is always thr way we
Nothing is always thr way we want it,
Thanks, Ian
Geezer
13 years ago
I see...
your dreams as clearly as I see my own. You have brought to mind my own mortality. You have also demonstrated the fragility of our bodies can be superceded by our minds! Well done, indeed! ~ Gee
Geremia
13 years ago
Thanks,Geez, You read me well
Thanks,Geez, You read me well.
Joe