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UNGUIDED?

Blindly through our days we stumble
too often lacking guidance
or even basic information
upon which to lend ourselves direction.
Is it any wonder at all
how oft we fall?

But our natures being what they are,
each time we fall we arise
to again proceed toward....what?
Far too many times we lack even a goal.
How can it then come as a surprise
that we often seek what we despise?

So we bounce off walls of our decisions
to ricochet in new directions,
haphazard due to lack of plan.
But maybe not truly unguided.
For how often do we unseen precipice approach
yet, sightless, turn ere lip we broach?

Another venture into the unfamiliar

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
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Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: South Carolina, United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Frost, Burns, Longfellow, Poe, and Johnson. I guess you've noticed these are all past masters. Other than folks on site I don't read any contemporary poets .

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scribbler

14 years ago

hi Ian

I guess if I were in cliche' workshop I would have said none plan to fail but often fail to plan lol.........stan

S

scribbler

14 years ago

Hi Lonnie

I expect we would all be amazed at how often we've approached some type precipice unknowingly and veered away at last moment..........................stan

loved

loved

14 years ago

how i appreciate anti epics

i'm quite sure
you don't

but each such poem
i read and say
i will comment ,
bard or not heaven sent
would still be ,
my sincerest comment

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scribbler

14 years ago

Hi loved

Thank you for the time to read and comment.............stan

Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

14 years ago

Scribbler

Wonderful reading this gem of poetry.
it is true in the lives of many that finding success is particularly impossible as they are unguided, either because they don't know the key to success, find the key, but the locks has been changed, or find the key to an dusty room of outdated knowledge.
persistence begets success if you don't give.

S

scribbler

14 years ago

hello

Yes there are many who gain success late in life due to pure persistence............stan

S

scribbler

14 years ago

Hi Vex

Yes there are many who just seem to stumble upon their goals lol............stan

S

scribbler

14 years ago

hi

Probably closer to being hanged for free verse that getting hang of lol. Thank you for taking the time to read and leave such kind comment................stan