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May 29, 2021
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Universe
My love
We ride on the dust of the comet
On the crest of the Milky Way
We are lost inside ourselves
within the interlacing
of our souls
Somewhere through the
Intersection of time and space
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Geezer
4 years 1 month ago
Sounds like...
you are well on your way, on a journey that will take us somewhere. I'd like to see where it goes. ~ Geez.
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Electric Blue
4 years 1 month ago
Universe
Geezer
We are all on a never ending journey through the cosmos.
Electric Blue
4 years 1 month ago
Universe
Mark
we all travel the gravel road of a never ending journey through the cosmos.
Dalton
4 years 1 month ago
Hi
Don't know where the next life will take me but I feel it will be another planet or another dimension a body but no pain. So long as I have my books and those I love I'll not complain. Well I will complain even in heaven.
Electric Blue
4 years 1 month ago
Universe
Dalton
As i say
i see or hear something and my mind explodes and this was the results
no planning just being
just taken to places unseen
Thank you my friend
Always Electric Blue