unread one ....Imaginary Imagery just was thinking who can stop me

Thinking of creating
a MASTERPIECE...
A voice spoke loudly

Think not of stars of the galaxy
you are not even on the Earth
worth the least
wow you have the guts
of creating Masters piece
machine gun yourself first
and
just be a piece
what of MASTER PIECE
think Lovedly ye

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

Comments

scribbler

7 years 5 months ago

lol

It's a bit odd that whenever I try to create something worth while that it flops but a lot of times when I just dash something off it gets loads of commentary. Goes to show how bad a judge of poetry I am. But keep on machine gunning and you can, like me, hope to get one right once in a while

lovedly

7 years 5 months ago

hope to get one right once in a while

yeahhhhhhhhh
hope to get one right once in a
LONGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG
while
PILE upon a pile
in LOVEDLY'S
inimitable style

LOL

now you may smile