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Oct 08, 2022
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This poem is part of the contest:
Neopoem Of The Week Contest October 9th to October 15th 2022
Unshaken
Hidden and wild and sacred:
My thoughts.
Too cruel to be spoken
from the mouth of the innocent.
Too weak to be borne
from the heart that has endured.
Too loving to share with those
who will surely use them against me.
I write by my own hand
for if it were my voice
it would steadily tremble,
mumbled out of uncertainty,
stuttered and unsure.
Written on paper with pen,
my words are unshaken.
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Rosewood Apothecary
2 years 8 months ago
Awesome
It’s very good. The rhythm is perfect. The flow from one idea to the next is excellent. It is a brief but deep look into the introspective writing process. Great story telling right to the final lines which wrap it up with the title. Very well done.
Tim
Kristen H.
2 years 8 months ago
Thank you!
Thank you very much!
Jackweb
2 years 8 months ago
Beautiful!
I love the rhythm and its ending. Written in a concise form. Very comprehensible!
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Kristen H.
2 years 8 months ago
Thank you
very much! I'm glad you liked it!
RoseBlack
2 years 8 months ago
Powerful
So much said in a short, elegant poem. Well done!
Kristen H.
2 years 8 months ago
Thank you
Thank you very much! :)