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A symphony
of prayer
touches my mind
in the peace
of whispered words
I soothe my heart

some are imprinted
without thought
as filigreed light
warms my soul,
they slip out
as adoration sung
from the heart

in these moments
of reverence
and love
where no pain
can burn
or malice survive

I come as close to heaven
as I can bear to be

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Beyond the Black Stump..Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: Pablo Neruda, P.K.Page, W.H.Auden, to many and various to include them all ...

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Lavender

Lavender

2 years 4 months ago

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Hello, Jayne,
A beautiful capture of what feels like, to me, a divine phenomenal moment.
L

Seren

Seren

2 years 4 months ago

Dearest L

To say it was profound is an understatement. Thanks so much for reading this one I'm really not sure what to call it.

Thank you for your insight!

Love J x

Lavender

Lavender

2 years 4 months ago

Hi, Jayne,

Maybe there are no words that fit a suitable title for such a glorious experience...
My heart overflows from this.
Lxx

Leslie

Leslie

2 years 4 months ago

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I loved this also, because it reveals the nature of the HUMAN heart, without compromising the acceptance of divinity!
I feel to say that the poetry that I've read has all been exceptional. This is a fun and safe place to work my feelings out
in a positive way! This is beautiful!

Leslie

Leslie

2 years 4 months ago

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I loved this also, because it reveals the nature of the HUMAN heart, without compromising the acceptance of divinity!
I feel to say that the poetry that I've read has all been exceptional. This is a fun and safe place to work my feelings out
in a positive way! This is beautiful!

Leslie

Leslie

2 years 4 months ago

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I loved this also, because it reveals the nature of the HUMAN heart, without compromising the acceptance of divinity!
I feel to say that the poetry that I've read has all been exceptional. This is a fun and safe place to work my feelings out
in a positive way! This is beautiful!

Seren

Seren

2 years 4 months ago

Dear Aesthetic Night

I am glad you're feeling comfortable here it should be a place you can come and feel safe to reveal self without fear of anything, I really appreciate your comment I am glad you found something in this to connect to.

Kind Regards Seren

Geezer

Geezer

2 years 4 months ago

In moments...

like this, one might tend to fall back upon the prayers learned by rote, and somehow retained over years of disuse. A magical moment, captured! ~ Love and higgest bugs, Geez.
.

Seren

Seren

2 years 4 months ago

Dearest Bro

Thanks so much these are moments that are treasured and always tucked into that pocket of memories.

thanks so much for the read and the insight they're always appreciated!

Love and higgliest bugs Sis xox

Seren

Seren

2 years 4 months ago

Dear Tim

I know that song & actually went and listened to it again when I read your comment,

Thanks for your thoughts they're always appreciated!

Kind Regards Jayne

Seren

Seren

2 years 4 months ago

Dear Kat

I am really glad you liked those lines they're also important to me and are the heart of this poem.

thanks for the lovely comment I really appreciate it!

Jayne xxx

Seren

Seren

2 years 4 months ago

Dear Mark

Thank you so much if it brought you peace in any sense or gave you a moment of rest, well, that's why I wrote this one it attempts to describe the indescribable.

Thanks so much for the read its always appreciated.

Hugs Jayne xxx

RoseBlack

RoseBlack

2 years 4 months ago

Amazing

Another brilliant piece! These spiritual moments are so incredible and precious. You did a wonderful job of capturing the feel of that moment.

Seren

Seren

2 years 4 months ago

Dearest Carrie

If I conveyed in anyway the moment, I have shared more than anyone could realise. Thank you so much for your thoughts and the read its always appreciated!

Love and biggest hugs Jayne