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Mar 14, 2011
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Unto Dust
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a pebble...
once a mighty stone
perhaps the one
slung at the head of Goliath
maybe
maybe not
the odds would certainly defy it
but, who knows
once a mighty stone
ground down
through time
once a mighty stone
long, long ago
About This Poem
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Candlewitch
14 years 4 months ago
Hello
Once a mighty stone! Very enjoyable poem.
always, Cat
brittle light
14 years 4 months ago
hello Cat
It's been a long time since we last connected! I hope all is well.
thank you for commenting.