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Mar 22, 2021
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When he said “ how smart, funny and
How cute your laugh is” i couldn’t help
But think about what they could have said after that
Was it something about my body i've wanted
A perfect body since i can remember but now
That i have something close to it i feel like
Thats all anyone wants me for
What about if after he said that he said and
Her fat ass too i want to be wanted but not for my body
About This Poem
Last Few Words: this boy had a crush on me first and i though i had no chance but i see now
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
emma iq
4 years 7 months ago
overthinking
Thank you , i am working on being better with my grammar automatically , this poem was a spur in the moment. i had lots of thoughts rushing through my head, The point of the poem is questioning everything and overthinking.