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Apr 14, 2012
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V E S H C H E S
cerrulean steptic
dissolve this
the slender notion
daizemul dream
choke the ballad
of hemerocallis
laced in the splinter
eye
traced in the broken
womb
cradlegrave smokey
ebb
they wore their work well
while the song of the spade
sang through the rain greased
shale
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Ian.T
13 years 2 months ago
Steve
so sorry but between the Clockwork Orange and Day Lillie's you lost me a bit too many words that need a book.
Sounds of working on the Railway sprang to mind but many are left at the track side on this one,
Yours Ian.T