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Esker
Esker
Aug 24, 2013 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

v a n g a u r d

shroud the crespulant stir
miraculous shatter
diving far the depth

arriving less then better

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Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Region, Country: north ontario, CAN

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Geezer

Geezer

11 years 11 months ago

Daring...

to dare! That is what I get from this. I also the know the feeling of arriving a little less better than I've wanted to. I think it is called bad planning or none at all! LOL I love that this one is so spare, but still leaving the impression.
~ Gee

Raven Maelstrom

Raven Maelstrom

11 years 11 months ago

less is more

I am reminded that brilliance can be shaded to the point of mediocrity where self-worth is questioned. Incisive. Nice fling.