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A Valentine Sonnet 21

When I compare my wife to any one
I think I see in her some hidden flaws;
But when I shut my erring eye, move on,
The honest one will give me cause to pause:
She stands by me in life’s oft rugged ride
Without complaints throughout my restless days
And takes my pain-filled moods in patient stride,
Expecting no rich gifts nor lavish praise.
She lives up to her marriage vows with gladness.
I love her, not because she tends to me
Should I be trapped in blues or gloominess.
She is my wife, the friend she strives to be,
Our hearts are truly one; they intertwine;
Therefore, she is my only Valentine.

About This Poem

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Review Request Direction: How was my language use?
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Editing Stage: Not actively editing

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Region, Country: Arizona, USA

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Lavender

Lavender

4 years 5 months ago

A Valentine Sonnet 21

A beautiful Valentine, Jerry! You and your wife, your friend, and your Valentine are blessed, indeed! I always enjoy your sonnets! Happy Valentine's Day to you both!
Thank you!
L

VanRyan

VanRyan

4 years 5 months ago

Oh, thank you, Lavender.

my Lynda and I are truly blessed with 52 happy years. Thank you for liking my sonne/ts, dear Lavender. A happy
Valentine to you, too. Jerry

VanRyan

VanRyan

4 years 5 months ago

Hi, Sir Geez;

yep, we hit it off quite well, the little lady and I. Thank you for the Valentine wishes, and we wish you the same.
Jerry

VanRyan

VanRyan

4 years 5 months ago

Hi Chima;

thank you very much for reading, and commenting on the above sonnet. Very nice of you, and I appreciate that. Jerry/van

Rula

Rula

4 years 5 months ago

A lucky lady

I guess.
I especially like the closing couplets.

VanRyan

VanRyan

4 years 5 months ago

Hi Rula;

thank you for the nice comment; its been much appreciated, truly. Wonderful hearing from from you, dear lady.
Jerry van K.

Breakinglogic

Breakinglogic

3 years 9 months ago

Jerry, pardon the random

Jerry, pardon the random comment, I've had this open in a browser tab for months ha!
I enjoyed this Valentine's sonnet. The diction seemed to fit the format well. I really like the way line 7 turned out. It is very phonetically appealing!