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Feb 14, 2011
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Valentine Valediction
Valentine Valediction
We sigh and weep for Love that's true,
Well, some of us; I don't, do you?
Love is the nature of us all,
With Lover's pride before a fall.
In searching for True Love we find
A dislocation of our mind;
A deep psychosis of our brain,
Who cares! for here we go again.
We find a girl who fills our dreams,
Are unaware of all her schemes.
And as the dream turns to nightmare
We're left with half a house - but where?
Be careful next time, don't be stupid
There's no defence from Darts of Cupid
About This Poem
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Tam the Chanter
14 years 3 months ago
Love
If only our heads ruled our hearts.
There would be no poets lol
Ian