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Jul 18, 2022
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Value Time
Value Time
Time is that something
man has created
by inventing a clock
to track the motion
of the sun
but all of us
fall short of it mostly
we all simply
whine, go here and there
to dance and dine
then we define
time yours you spent
money mine
now for your smaller pleasures
I have none
I'm very busy
for you I have
just no more of my
invaluable time
don't weep as I sleep
said she
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Candlewitch
2 years 12 months ago
dear Lovedly,
have a refreshing rest period.
*Love, Cat
lovedly
2 years 12 months ago
hi Cats hope ur better
off with migraines
what does dentist say
DENTURES may be
but wow costly
yes can't help it
how else to eat
Geezer
2 years 12 months ago
Resting well...
is the key, she said,
So don't think, you're in my head
I'll have time to rest when I'm dead
Good work, but still deadly. ~ Geez.
.
lovedly
2 years 12 months ago
Good work, but still deadly
GEE glad u b it's not like deathly no RIP yet lol
Geezer
2 years 12 months ago
glad to hear...
continue to be heard. ~ Geez.
.
Ray Whitaker
2 years 11 months ago
Invaluable times
Every breath drawn is invaluable….
The older I get, the more I feel it
Your poem here is an enjoyable read…
lovedly
2 years 11 months ago
enjoy
what is the mission of a prolific poet
but to help others
N J O Y
pull em out of mind's deepest graves
let them know
TIME
has different waves
many learn to surf
even in time's
RIVERS
and this is
LIFE