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lovedly
lovedly
Jul 26, 2022 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)
This poem is part of the contest:

Summertime Blues

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VANCOUVER MISSED JULY CONTEST

TIME BETRAYS

sad time betrayed me
the storm that day
denied my
RIGHT
delayed my flight
then they said
NO FLIGHT
Just imagine my plight
you might

no chance now in this life
the clouds have come again
in Niagara may not still rain
I know
as I am standing outside the met office
their MODELS
aren't now matching

today mostly lovely nudes
leave their bikinis loose
lest it rains

About This Poem

Last Few Words: MY TWO PENCE WORTH FREE VERSE...

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

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Comments

Geezer

Geezer

2 years 11 months ago

My hope...

would be; that the great falls would tear the rags from those models and embarass the whole bunch of them! Imagine,
canceling the great lovedly's flight! How dare they? ~ Geez.
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