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lou
lou
This poem is part of the workshop:

Writing With Emotions

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Verbal leakage- Writing with Emotion Workshop

Bull shit, verbal leakage,     
 you cruise in 2nd gear
When you should be in 3rd,
You don't engage your brain

Your a waste of space
All you can do is fornicate
And procreate that any ape can do

The fact of your existence offends 
Makes me want to stamp you out,
Scream and holler 

bull sit verbal leakage
I want expunge you 
I need lobotomise my memory of you
Obliterate the stain

About This Poem

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: West London, GBR

Favorite Poets: Pablo Neruda , Jack Kerouac, Alan Ginsberg, D.H Lawrence, Jim Morrison's lyrics,

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raj

13 years 9 months ago

lou

very hateful for sure but you may want to correct some spellos...the venom can be felt so yes it is effective..

lou

lou

13 years 9 months ago

Raj

Thanks , I can't spell we just have to face the facts LOL!!!!

Lou

lou

lou

13 years 9 months ago

lmao

I feel like i need a shrink, I have got my emotions all screwed up

LOL

Lou