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Sep 08, 2011
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Verbal leakage writing with emotions workshop Re-write
Bullshit, verbal leakage,
you are putrid seepage,
dripping down my mind.
Your a waste, a product of filth
a perverted fornicater
a grubby little gob shite of the worst kind
Bullshit verbal leakage
every time I see you
I feel the need to lobotomise
and lose my tiny mind.
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
lou
13 years 9 months ago
Chyrs
I'm glad that you think so LOL!!
Lou
Candlewitch
13 years 9 months ago
Dear Lou,
You are sooooo BAD!!! I love it!
always, Cat
lou
13 years 9 months ago
Cat
LOL!! Well it is a hate poem.
lou
raj
13 years 9 months ago
whosoever is at the receiving
whosoever is at the receiving end of this ..BEWARE and ...stay outta the way of Lou,....
fun apart..this is powerfully hateful...
raj
13 years 9 months ago
Andrew
Andrew thank you for getting the button for worjshop critique which hitherto was missing from my page..Lou thank you for referring this snag to Andrew...