Vial

in the room
a rose under glass
stories bound
to page in a book
turn the cover
one must
look

winter winds
howl like
pack of wolves

...

About This Poem

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: north ontario, CAN

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Comments

eightmenout

9 years 8 months ago

Steve

Your writing seems to be evolving, morphing into different images. I hope you enjoy the adventure, the risks and adrenaline that comes as a "friend with benefits" to change.

Esker

9 years 8 months ago

risk is adrenaline

benifit of change....much there of this.. roles made for the right mixture to play
only feel like im living when i know i might be dying

Pugilist

9 years 8 months ago

I always enjoy your work

I've said it before, but it bears repeating, you have a lyrical voice in your poems and I thoroughly appreciate your talent.

With this piece, I like the way I am led through the story and the ending is a good juxtaposition to the introduction.

Esker

9 years 8 months ago

yah....like that

finding that voice was brutally hard
and ive paid for it...wow..over and over
but glad u like it
this one was short
a lot like the older works were too

thanks

ThEdges

9 years 8 months ago

Esker, I haven't read all

of your poems, but I've never seen you write one so short. This is very good.

Best always,
Laura