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Victim
Her captors did not hesitate
To desecrate and mutilate
Her consercrated cavern.
Now it lies,
Rent as the tomb of Christ,
And crying out
With Abel's voice.
The less taken path
Is her open grave,
The dry bush is her wreath.
The marching ants
May pay her homage
With bits of cockroach legs.
The crickets sing a requiem mass,
The spiders weave her shroud,
The blinded earthworms silently
Declare a solemn feast.
Crippity, crippity,
Slippery slomp,
The earthworms make
A solemn feast.
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Abouy rape, which is an uncomfortable subject for many
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Direction: How was my language use?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Frenchf
12 years 6 months ago
The ode to grossness in Delhi
Beautifully portrayed
William Saint George
12 years 6 months ago
Thanks for the kind words.
Thanks for the kind words. You were right about the main subject of the poem. Delhi.