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Feb 12, 2023
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Vindictiveness...
Sour taste of defeat
An inescapable truth
Is born from wisdom
About This Poem
Style/Type: Structured: Eastern
Review Request Direction:
What did you think of my title?
How does this theme appeal to you?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
RoseBlack
2 years 5 months ago
Brilliant
Three lines...says so much....well done...I may need to try a Haiku.
Candlewitch
2 years 5 months ago
dear geezer,
so very true!
*hugs, Cat
Seren
2 years 5 months ago
Dearest Bro
Wow, this says a thousand things in only three lines, I think it's a brilliant Haiku!
Bravo!!!!
I really think this is one of your best-est Haiku. Nice Grammer huh? lol
love and higgliest bugs Sis xox
Rosewood Apothecary
2 years 5 months ago
Hmmm
Hmmm… let me think
Tim
Seren
2 years 5 months ago
Xox
Xox
Geezer
2 years 5 months ago
Thank you so much...
It's always so nice to hear from you. I liked yours too, as you can tell. ~ Geezer.
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