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May 06, 2018
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Vita Vegan:
With diet Vegan
Vigorous and healthy lifespan
Energized atman
About This Poem
Last Few Words: I welcome all comments - positive and negative. I just have one request: please refrain from being profane so that our brain can rise above the mundane and aim for a higher plane.
Style/Type: Structured: Eastern
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
Rula
7 years 2 months ago
Totally agree
Did you mean to say ( at man?)
OriginalRhyku
7 years 2 months ago
Thanks for your input Rula
Atman refers to a soul (derived from the Sanskrit Atma - essence of the Universe). Please take a look at my other poems and I would appreciate your review.