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Esker
Esker
Mar 02, 2011 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

vivid..

lean against the warm enamel
water beads
releases
falls

and the fan purrs
luxurious
behind the yellowed
chrome

all lifes illicit
want
encircles

warm
soothing
turning
cold

like the bitter bold
this pain that flows

and behind beautiful
eyes
while outside the
snow gently drifts

another drop
another breath
in the hollow
of the ache

the memory
that serves
to make

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Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Region, Country: north ontario, CAN

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Geezer

Geezer

14 years 4 months ago

Looking closely...

I realise that although there is a subtle difference in your work lately, there is still the sensuality in your poems, that I have come to expect. Your work is almost Japanese in its' composition, in the succinct precision and use of words. I applaud the change, and the challenge is well met. Bravo, my friend! ~ Gee