Waiting (Steven's blurb)

Waiting...
Waiting for the waiting to end.
Why am I waiting?

(a thought from my Steven)

About This Poem

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
How does this theme appeal to you?
Is the internal logic consistent?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Northwestern Wisconsin USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Edgar Allan Poe, William Blake, Bob Dylan, Tom Petty, Carlos Castaneda, Jim Morrison, the whole of Neopoet and many more.

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Comments

Rula

2 years 8 months ago

Hello Cat

Nice to read you after this long time.
Waiting is an interesting title to draw any reader in for sure.
Sorry I am not familier with "your Steven's blurb."
So I can't help here much, but I would suggest changing "why" with "what" in the last line. Don't know if that makes any sense. Only a thought.

I am very happy to read you again dear.
Thanks for sharing.

Candlewitch

2 years 8 months ago

dearest Rula,

I am so very happy to be in your company again. you take good care!

*hugs, Cat

Triskelion

2 years 8 months ago

Now THAT...

...is some serious waiting!

Candlewitch

2 years 8 months ago

so nice to see you...

I read your comment to him. he smiled his secretive smile ;)

thanks, Cat

Rosewood Apothecary

2 years 8 months ago

The name of the game

The waiting for the waiting to end. That’s a heck of a thing and I sure feel that. As much as it feels bad it usually does end. Problem is, then we are waiting for something too. It’s a beautiful blunder inherent with any level of self awareness I think. Waiting in vain.

With regards
Tim