Walkiing in the night

I went walking alone in the dead of the night The birds had taken flight Except for the nocturnal owl Flying silently about Not a soul was in sight Hear the echoes of my footsteps As I went walking in the night

Eulekia

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Dear Neopets do you like my poem? Send me your comments. You can contact me at my email address ifeanyiiweze@yahoo.com Eulekia

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About the Author

Region, Country: Nigeria, NGA

Favorite Poets: William Shakespear, William Morris

Comments

raj

6 years 11 months ago

Hi Eulekia

good short poem making the night come alive...
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Eulekia

6 years 10 months ago

My poem Walking in the night

Dear Raj
thanks for your comment. Please send one of your poems to me. You can contact me at my email address ifeanyiiweze@yahoo.com

Eulekia

raj

6 years 10 months ago

Dear Eulekia.

my poems are all listed on my profile page....is there any specific theme on which you would want me to try to write a poem?
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themoonman

6 years 10 months ago

Eulekia,

Hi and welcome to the site. Please do not
include your personal email, we highly suggest
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thank you.