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Oct 29, 2017
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Walking In Glory
With Jesus beside me
I'm walking in glory
With Jesus in me
I'm rejoicing to Jesus
Jesus is everything to me
He's awesome in glory
In mercy and majesty
He's Jesus, Lord over all
By: Leona Chaput
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Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
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jane210660
7 years 11 months ago
Laura
This is a poetry workshop site.
We submit poems we have written ourselves for critique by others.
I can’t see the value in the above poem by another poet.