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Sep 10, 2024
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THE WALLS DON'T TALK
I wish
i had someone,
to argue with.
the walls,promise:
peace.
they merely suffocate you,
with silence.
i want to have
a living-
person.
one, i will never own.
one, who can argue
with me
and, help me
feel:
real.
silence, makes me feel
divisible.
many parts of a badly crafted:
puzzle.
do i even exist?
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
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Rula
9 months 4 weeks ago
Hello
Especially like the last stanza.
silence, makes me feel
divisible.
many parts of a badly crafted:
puzzle.
Nothing I see need to change
Very true. Thank you for sharing.
kowque
9 months 4 weeks ago
Thank you for
Stopping by,and the kind words :)
Leslie
9 months 4 weeks ago
Kowque
I thought this your best poem yet Ive been preoccupied. You can email me any time and I'll do my best to respond. Great poem. I'm sorry you're so alone. I know how that is!
kowque
9 months 3 weeks ago
My special person
Thank you for the feedback.
Words Ablaze
9 months 2 weeks ago
It is nice to have someone to
It is nice to have someone to argue with compared to the peace of being alone. In some ways that peace is no peace at all.
kowque
9 months 2 weeks ago
You are still alive
We thank god ;)
Candlewitch
9 months 2 weeks ago
dear koki,
Rula quoted my favorite lines... great poem, good work!
*hugs, Cat
kowque
9 months 2 weeks ago
Having you stop by
Always makes me smile