Wandering Wallet

The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

The poem "Lost Wallet" demonstrates a clear narrative arc, which is an effective tool in engaging the reader's interest. The story of the lost wallet and the subsequent discovery of simple pleasures is well conveyed.

However, the poem could benefit from a more consistent rhythm and rhyme scheme. The current structure seems somewhat irregular, which can disrupt the flow of the poem. Consider revising the poem to establish a more consistent meter, which could enhance the overall musicality of the piece.

The use of imagery in the poem is commendable, particularly in the lines "enjoying the moon and starlight, hearing music until dawn." This creates a vivid picture in the reader's mind and effectively conveys the peacefulness of the scene.

The theme of the poem, the discovery of simple pleasures over material possessions, is a powerful one. However, the last line of the poem seems to moralize the theme explicitly. It might be more effective to let the reader draw this conclusion themselves from the events of the poem. Consider revising the last line to show, rather than tell, the theme.

Lastly, the poem could benefit from a more careful use of punctuation. There are several lines that could use commas or periods to make the reading more clear and fluid. For instance, "Shape chosen, the ever lovely heart" might be better expressed as "Shape chosen: the ever lovely heart."

Overall, the poem has a strong narrative and theme, but could be improved with more consistent rhythm, subtler expression of the theme, and more careful punctuation.

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Opens in a traditional manner akin to my most beloved poem by Padraic Collum “She Moves Through The Fair” with touches of “The Black Velvet
Band” about a beauteous woman thief who undergoes permanent transportation to Australia. With your own take on the details leaves you thinking can you really trust to love or does love forgive all sins. Whatever the moral a splendid pleasing write that feeds the mind with imagery and the skill of your pen love John xxx

While I am bewildered at the meter of this one, I am also cognizant of the fact that you have written a great story!
I like the thought of the lovers, making memories of the experience rather than relying on the material geegaws of the day.
Very nice, great story. ~ Geez.
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having issues with the heat, but they are mostly resolved now, with the moving of a particular AC unit to the kitchen across from my room and switching of my window fan from blowing in, to exhausting out. Now, happy as a clam, sitting here in my room working on the site. Thank you for noticing my absence, it makes me feel like I am doing something that would be missed. ~ Geez.
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