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Mar 14, 2013
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Wanton
Hot sexual energy
seeping through my pores
sashaying wantonly
I kneel on all fours
He grabs my buttocks
and enters fast
a hard rough fuck
fulfills my lust
Withdrawing slowly
he slaps my bum
Oh, what he does to me
I, once again, come
About This Poem
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - draft
Comments
Frenchf
12 years 4 months ago
Stop reading 50 shades
I have to refer you to Ross's comment on my write"the old pervert" and say you may get arrested for your write!
sueb
12 years 4 months ago
lol haven't read the old
lol haven't read the old pervert must look it up have a good day cheers x