Watching

Once
when the world was
empty cold
The oceans wave would
lap and fold

Beast opened his eyes to
a world without life
a day without night

A feelingless domain
of lonely beings
Leaving him
with no reason of the
way things turned out
why he's still around
He wanders away coming to a shimmery lake
He Thinks...

Is this dream we call
life
a reality well kept?
Is the Keeper of all worlds
in a place
where He wept?

Crying tears
upon a realm of constant
destruction and despair
Contemplating
ways to repair
damage that has been done

Slowly
The devil will
realize she’s won
Eating at our minds
Ripping at our souls
Selling all the lies
best sold

Free at cost but
price is high
Leaving our soul
left there
tied
to a body that can never die

To end the pain
which lays at wait
Fate
has taken her plate
Left you in a state
where you relate
appreciate
rage hate
You want to wipe the slate clean

Just leave this lonely world
Filled
with constant turmoil
This pathetic life is
spoiled
We are only roaches
left here
Suffering
Supplying
an interesting show for
Things
that think
we don’t know

AS THEY WATCH US

About This Poem

Last Few Words: I wrote this as 1 continuous stream of unconcious thinking Im not very good with where to break off so if its not right I'd appreciate some feedback and a lil direction as to how n where one should break at

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
Is the internal logic consistent?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft