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Dec 24, 2014
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we are minuscule
temporary atoms
magnified by eye's magnification
500 times
if we had no eyes
we wouldn't have ever imagined
we had something
that did rise
and
that's no surprise
tis a surmise
500 times magnified
and
we cry out for more size...
Merry Christmas let it be!
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
mand
10 years 6 months ago
Lovely
We are aren't we! :) nothing more than a blip in time and space!
I hope you are having a great time :)
Love Mand xxxxx
lovedly
10 years 6 months ago
you as well as i are
the beeps of time
one beep and we all are
in and out
in terms of time and space
yes we are
so beepless ourselves