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c lynn brooks
Aug 23, 2020 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

We Breathe As One

Our breath comes in wisps of passion
and becomes one
I feel your heart keeping rhythm with mine
your whispers
my murmurings entwine
my tears touch your cheek
your tears meet mine
they flow together as one
are they tears of joy?
or that of fulfillment and content
oh babe when will this be?
this blending of you into me

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: north carolina usa, USA

Favorite Poets: Leonard Cohen, Edgar Alan Poe, ray Bradbury, John Grissom, .Alan S Jeeves James patterson,

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Lavender

Lavender

4 years 10 months ago

We Breathe As One

Hi, Chrys,
This is elegant and thoughtful. "...your tears meet mine, they flow together as one..." Gentle and reserved, yet passionate, too. Quite beautiful.
Thank you!
L

Gracy

Gracy

4 years 10 months ago

Hi lynn, another romantic

Hi lynn, another romantic poem, lovely imagery and questionning. The title, content and all else are so inspiring. Thanks for sharing, best, Gracy