we love to chain

We love to chain

Slavery is in our veins
when your grand child arrives
let him free
don’t put him in a pram
then see
man is not as independent as birds and bees
we all love overpowering mystery
happy be the animal kingdom,
they learn faster than you and me

Where was god
when we were born,
don't ask me
we all are free
take it from me
but dependent human beings

A miniscule few are born leaders
so don't belittle the animal kingdom

A Lion will roar
just wait and see!

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

Comments

weirdelf

11 years ago

me like

http://vocaroo.com/i/s1gZ7enJwtOi

Just a socio/biological note. The "higher" mammals, like ourselves, tend to have more useless, dependant offspring. I think it's to do with the ability to learn as opposed to surviving on instinct.

lovedly

11 years ago

Thanks

nice comment

weirdelf

11 years ago

oh, incidentally,

you know what a "chain" is street jargon? Gang rape. I'm sure you did not intend the association however I might reconsider the title.

lovedly

11 years ago

Oh no Rape

chaining is just confining animals to a cage

dogs indoors
birds in cages
and animals in zoos

restriction of freedom of all

you may suggest a new title,
if i so pleases you

lovedly

4 years 2 months ago

JESS ALWAYS SPENT SOME TIME READING

my ''creative'' poetry
here the stream system pushes down a poem
and
obscures it into the endlessness of time
I call it as
OBLIVION
Instead of creating newer poems
I thought of delving deep into your NEO'S stream
This is just a scream
come read me
a poem of your dreams

PAUL ARE YOU LISTENING!!!!