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Anna Severchuk
Anna Severchuk
Apr 15, 2022 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)
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We need to believe (following Robert Frost)

we need to believe

we need to be brave
till we lay in the grave;
we need to be strong
when everything's wrong;
we need to believe
so we can live
as we are the kings
of our lives and dreams!
hey, can you hear?
the freedom is near!
so make your choice,
don't hide your voice!
come on, go ahead
but don't lose your head!

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Odessa,Ukraine, UKR

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Candlewitch

Candlewitch

3 years 2 months ago

hello Anna,

in this line: and so we can live

take out (and) it is unnecessary and detracts from the poem. otherwise you have a fine poem.

*hugs, Cat

Geezer

Geezer

3 years 2 months ago

I agee with...

Cat, and only have to add, that you have a misspelling in [com'on]. ~ Geezer.
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Jackweb

Jackweb

3 years 2 months ago

Wonderful

Apt! So lovely. Very educative and instructive. Nice composition

S

scribbler

3 years 2 months ago

Hmmmm...

I think most of Frost's rhyming poems were broken into stanzas. But I think the message is clear. Welcome to neopoet. If you have questions about navigating here or anything else just ask me or about any member. In the mean time stay safe in Odessa