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Sep 18, 2014
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We write to while
We write to while
they read to,
at us smile
we love to be heard
that's our style
they have but to walk
that extra mile
so Neopoets
smile with me
I will also with thee
but let you all smile
along with us,
but not at us
will all smile please....
So smile will ye
all neopoets
as does this loved
lovedly
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
alidzain
10 years 9 months ago
smiling
say cheeese! lol. I wonder if it will be better to entitle this piece "Smiling Together". Good one.
Alid
lovedly
10 years 9 months ago
your views r welcome
u smile let others see
thank you wait and see
as u smile with me