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Jun 28, 2021
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weeping willow
Early on
a misty morning
I hear
a lonesome cry .
For twas
a weeping willow
torn with
teardrop
in it’s eyes.
I whistled
“ what’s the matter”
And this was
His reply.
“For I’m
a winter willow
with
my mind
weighed in woe .
For I have
to face
the future
But I’m
too afraid to go .”
About This Poem
Last Few Words: I used the rhythm or my inspiration for this was the song Kevin Barry sang by Tracy Newman.
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Candlewitch
3 years 4 months ago
hello,
I very much enjoyed the flow and pacing of this poem.
*hugs, Cat
*
Edward nigma
3 years 4 months ago
Thank you
thank you for reading I haven’t written much in a long time because I’ve been having problems with my head and I’ve been writing a story
But thank you I was inspired to write this by Tracy Newmans song Kevin Barry
https://youtu.be/A-ROx35kjFg
Tracey Underwood
3 years 4 months ago
Great!
Your poem was great. The imagery was detailed nicely. Thanks for sharing. Love and light. Namaste
Edward nigma
3 years 4 months ago
Thank you
Thank you for reading this i usually have alliteration I don’t usually rhyme . Anyway thank you again I hope your doing fine
Candlewitch
3 years 4 months ago
it is...
really nice to see you back! we have missed you!
*hugs, Cat
ever, eddy