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Jul 31, 2022
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This poem is part of the contest:
Neopoem of The Week Contest July 31 to August 6 2022
Welcome to TV series
Take a ride to a little town
See, in the sky is flying crow
Beacon Hills or Mystic Falls
Bloody-bats or wolfy-dogs
Two cool brothers in the car
Caring salt through 'merica
Monsters, ghosts or any others
Vampires-sisters, werewolves-brothers
Sticks, and stones, and guns, and magic
With some funny moments, tragic
Love and hate and need of choice
Welcome in dear girls and boys
About This Poem
Last Few Words: TV series - something that helps to escape in a better place and live a thousand different lives. If not reading a book than watching films and TV series.
Review Request Direction: How does this theme appeal to you?
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Candlewitch
2 years 11 months ago
escape is good...
any old port in a storm *sighs, Cat
Ray Whitaker
2 years 11 months ago
interesting poem
i am curious about a couple of things
"See, in the sky is flying crow" >> adding an "a" perhaps? [a flying crow]
"Caring salt through 'merica" >>did you mean Carrying?
"Love and hate and need of choice". >> [in need] instead of "and need"
Anna Severchuk
2 years 10 months ago
Thank you for corrections!
Thank you for corrections!