What Freaks Me Out

The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

The poem lists a series of fears, moving from concrete, tangible images to a more abstract, emotional fear. The progression from rats and clowns to "life without you" is clear, but the connection between these specific fears and the final emotional fear could be strengthened. Consider clarifying why these particular images were chosen or how they relate symbolically or emotionally to the final line. Additionally, the poem might benefit from more vivid or unexpected descriptions to deepen the reader's engagement and enhance the emotional impact of the conclusion.

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this one for sure. A scary feeling to know that someone you love, could leave you in this world alone. You delivered. ~ Geez.
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This hit hard.
I felt it in my bones

I dig that you listed those creepy factors that freak out most of us, and yet the closing lines make it a relatable emotion that all of us have that special someone we'd hate to be without.
Excellent work.