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WHAT HAS HAPPENED

NO MOVEMENT TODAY
ITS a very sunny day
Why not come and play
Let's make hay
what do you all say

Silence disturbs
wonder the world is caught
in some kinda
tsunami

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Silence is like a mourning morning

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

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Comments

Geezer

Geezer

4 years 3 months ago

Yes, there is...

a sudden silence! Sometimes, I feel it when there is something of great importance about to happen or in the aftermath of a calamity. Hmmm... ~ Geez.
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lovedly

lovedly

4 years 3 months ago

yes

but why was Neopoet's resting for hours
it unnerved me
Gee
O what a relief