What I keep saying to those standing in front of me

The last thing you wanna do
Is waiting in a queue
Sweating,
With numbing feet,
Time reluctantly passes
Be wise , think about it
Do not hesitate

Whatever you're waiting for
It s not worth it
So,
quit it
I know you shan't regret it.
I'll take the burden off
and wait in the queue
Instead of you

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Well! Who knows. It might work. :)

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Jordan, JOR

Favorite Poets: I favor the ones who are closer to humanity and , Poets are humanity when the world lose it.

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1 year 2 months ago

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Leslie

1 year 2 months ago

Rula...

This was my favorite today. I wish only that fear had not such powerful sway. Thank you I will try to take your advice. Another
wonderful emancipating poem.

Leslie

1 year 2 months ago

Rula

You can wait there for me. I'm venturing courageously into the treasures held within the unknown.

Leslie

1 year 2 months ago

Hesitation is the close counterpart of fear. I love this poem. It puts things in their proper
perspective for my current situation. I know now that I must no longer act as a child
and make important decisioins.