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Mar 03, 2016
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what is time
Your Wisdom of time surpasses mine...
Time can never stand still...
even for a moment...
so we live moment to moment
momentarily...
and
Time passes by you and me...
as we two stand solitarily...
in this vast wilderness....
as time does flee
no one does or shall care for neither you nor me...
as we both in time become obscure...
now no entity...
we were perhaps
but now no more
Time can make no difference for you or me...
as time has
No friend ,no enemy
time alone is lonely
yet free
All Time is not the same...
neither for you nor me...
let us live in time
Silently and slowly unbeknownly
See time through your window
as it smiles
and
passes you by
so smile your while
and say
O Time goodbye!
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
scribbler
9 years 4 months ago
yep
Time is its own thing and care not a whit for we mortal men. Not sure I agree with your capitalizing so much. Imho capitalization for emphasis should be used sparingly..........stan
lovedly
9 years 4 months ago
Thanx friend philosopher and guide
normally I follow uuuuuuuuuuuuu
Sparrow
9 years 4 months ago
Loved
A good write.
As you know the children say there is no time, this is why they can be in several places at once.
It is so hard to take on board, we have met and had tea at the entrance to the cave and I have shown you many things, but memories become static if we are on this plain and we can only realise one moment of now,
Take care young Bard and will walk with you some more,
Yours, Ian