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I, and They.
We sit with rain upon the roof, trundling in waves
steady like the arriving,
steady like the leaving.
No one fighting front to front
over lines that are not even
existant
as sure though as our distance
feel them watching
and i'm tired unsure
so show
i'm uncaring
i want the rain on my shoulders
sure as the all broken
i accept as tokens
acceptance too real a cost
a world
i never lived
but thrived to own
a silver town
in a snow globe
a heart
in the fingers of my
cage
each ring
a key
each word
unfurling
darkness
to sleep
im lean
but my ego
too large
to squeeze
within
they fly
in the dark
to land
on the hearts
throne
their brilliant eyes
the cold stone
an epitaph smile
a loop like the miles
while the racetrack
crowd roars
behind our happy
murmurs
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
lovedly
10 years 11 months ago
rula and I have decided to keep the undiscovered list to zero wi
rula and I have decided to keep the undiscovered list to zero
will you also join our group too...
my dear Esker
Yu and I have been read fully
all dues are now nil
Esker
10 years 11 months ago
will keep an eye on this in future Loved!
thank you for the invite!
lovedly
10 years 11 months ago
great .....Rula she cleared most of yours and mine too
we must take the lead
to keep the morale of poets like me
and please do read
GRIEF IN BRIEF
many want a copy of it
I did permit it as
@anony
Esker
10 years 11 months ago
choice..
join in the melee or take a stand break the spelle. E ey
lovedly
10 years 11 months ago
happy
undiscovered ==zero as of now
did u read the
grief in brief
Roscoe Lane
10 years 11 months ago
As always,
As always loved reading your work, got the impression that someone was getting ready to travel. To wander free so to speak. Regards Roscoe...