Wheels Turning

So many wheels
and turn they must
for if they don't
the'll turn to rust

Turning, churning
thoughts are burning
memories into my minds path

spokeless, wordless
thoughts ever surging
leaving only dust

Spinning,never winning'
all is endless revolutions
evolving then dissolving
all in it's wake

Last Few Words: This was written for a picture a friend had sent me and wanted a poem they had taken of bicycles

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

Region, Country: north carolina usa, USA

Favorite Poets: Leonard Cohen, Edgar Alan Poe, ray Bradbury, John Grissom, .Alan S Jeeves James patterson,

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5 years ago

A wise descriptive little piece. Very much enjoyed the read.
Hope your friend likes it too.
Thanks for sharing dear.

5 years ago

Thank you
yes he did like it

5 years ago

Thank you

To be honest I wasn't thinking of a bike when I wrote this and you picked up on that right away

5 years ago

Just seeing a whole lot of wheels turning in your mind. Wondering who goes there? A poem within a poem. ~ Geez.
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5 years ago

Very astute observation thank you