When I Awoke And Sensed The Nearing Day

Loved the poem, clearly expresses how we often see the new day arriving

Lovely poem, I enjoyed reading it as it has such depth and yet its simplicity gives the poem its grandeur. My only query is about this line.

revealing waning moon and ardent light.

As the sun is coming up I got a little confused. Maybe: discarding waning moon, for ardent light? Only a suggestion. I still think it is lovely. Ruby :)

Thank you Lavender, it was my pleasure. Ruby :) xx

I would rearrange the fourth line of the first stanza to say: through tiny cracks through the wooden floor.
Otherwise, a very peaceful start to a wonderful day and a great poem. ~ Geez.
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I often wake early in the morning and feel this way as the sun edges up over the mountain in front of my house

..in this momentary expression. It must feel wonderful to have written it with your daughter. I liked how the darkness slipped away through cracks in the floor.

Thomas

I really love the third stanza. I can see the angels lined up and hear their beautiful voices. What a great way to seize the day! I know I have said it before but the gentleness, compassion and elegance of your poems really are like a much needed hug! Well done!