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May 07, 2012
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WHEN PETALS BEGIN TO FALL [inspired by our Anni]
WHEN PETALS FALL
[inspired by our ANNI]
When a flower begins to fail
its colors bright
its beauty pale and still
lingers in the morning sun .
Petals fall one by one
as it languishes in Day’s light
until its Night has come
— Geremia, May 07, 2012
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Nordic cloud
14 years 1 month ago
Very beautiful Longobardolino
Very beautiful, just right,
and when the night is come
and gone the sun,
you sleep well my knight.
Anni
He means this Anni.
Nordic cloud
14 years 1 month ago
And where are they the others
And where are they the others?
When you breath life into words of beauty,
well done you as I know you suffer now.
Annuccia
Ian.T
14 years 1 month ago
Joe
Beautifully written and always remember that after the petals of the fruit tree fall the fruit sets and brings new life to all,
Yours Ian.T
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