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when right fight.... if wrong bow

I have been missing
your footsteps '
any ways

as I have been away
for so many days
perhaps
your footsteps
devushka/lady friends
came my way

deaf as I am
you may say
can't hear your footsteps
as always
hardly you speed across
now a days
my pathways

dobri denh...
good day wishes
come from
Niagara
again

from lovedla
la la lala
lol
can you now hear
my silent steps

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

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Comments

lovedly

lovedly

7 years 2 months ago

great Irene

I knew you'd read it
on your place
jess would've cursed me
thanks
tread softly
be worldly
many thieves are lurking
dangerously

lovedly

lovedly

7 years 2 months ago

O Irene not to worry

on another site 1000 read me daily
and
yet on another one
at least 300 plus regularly

my poetry is exquisite
neo wants Victorianics'

Your Sunku now shall lead
I will also compose
but help me with syllables counting
on fingers I do poorly

lovedly

lovedly

7 years 2 months ago

OK yes

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x three times well
I will sunku
soonly