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Mar 20, 2022
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when winds come crushing
When winds come crushing
When winds blow off at hurricane speed
gals run to the boys
who have blue brown or green eyes
they damn care then
what may be happening
as the crush is seemingly found interesting
but then the wind needs to blow away
and she her crush thing too
heaven knows who was he
real true or like any other you
kiss me says she
(Inspired by a poets crushing)
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Geezer
3 years 3 months ago
Any port...
in a storm? Is that the idea? I think that when there is a calamity, like a hurricane, bad snowstorm or a flood, where people are crowded together, strangers can become lovers easily. Makes for an easily forgotten episode in time of crisis, when people think this might be the last time! ~ Geez.
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lovedly
3 years 3 months ago
Gee
right on the spot r ye beautifully they live those moments happily lol
Candlewitch
3 years 3 months ago
dear lovedly,
right you are!
*hugs, Cat
*
lovedly
3 years 3 months ago
You really do
inspire me Cats
I'm now going to compose a poem
she asking me to pray
Candlewitch
3 years 3 months ago
dear lovedly,
that is one of the nicest things you, or anyone, has ever said to me!!!
*hugs & love, Cat
*
lovedly
3 years 3 months ago
Cats kindness begets
kindness